Listen here

With little cheer

We will all disappear

Within his inner ear

Dark barking deer

Show no fear

Wondering solar year

Gods appear

Earth like Pap smear

Bloody kings spear

His words sincere

His orders clear

Within one year

The judgement severe

The celestrial sphere

Will disappear

Poem from my upcoming book “Yin”

By: Tim Lundmark

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Comments
  1. ram0singhal says:

    divine…..eternity dancing on eternity like football….love all…..

  2. We knew right then that other men
    Had planned to have us killed.
    But could this plot have not been stopped
    If God had only willed?
    Was it perhaps, some moral lapse,
    That made us lose the twins?
    Had we received, as some believed,
    A judgment for our sins?

    But if that’s true, then how can you
    Account for those who died?
    The tender son who hurt no one—
    The meek, expectant bride?
    And then what’s more, each noble score,
    Who tried to save the day:
    Could these recruits be substitutes
    For those who got away?

  3. Melissa says:

    I like the poetry, but can you explain to me what it is supposed to mean? Is it about the end of the world and Gods judgement of his people. I sometimes take things too literally, and am stuck on “earth like pap smear” I don’t get the analogy. (sp) Ive had pap smears and can’t figure out how it relates to the earth. Love ya.

    • Tim Lundmark says:

      sis,
      The pap smear is god opening mother earths vagina and testing the people who are all canceras cells, which brings him the land his bloody kings spear onto the people. After the wraith of God, he gave the survivers 1 year to stop the bullshit, if they are unable to live by gods words everything will be destroyed. You know me and yolu know my beliefs. When you go into Gods inner ear you enter the entire universe. The “dark barking deer” represents the people of earth who no longer fear god, and run rampant with evil and greed. God sees this evil for what it is by the pap smear. He eraticates all the cancer cells in hopes of salovation…if they fail to behave God will just fuck everyone up. I hope that helps to describe where I was going with this

  4. Traci says:

    I liked this very much! Beautiful poem, the words flowed very well….

    • Tim Lundmark says:

      Sis 2, Thank you. I hope “Yin” and “Yang” sell good. I have been writing better poems then what were in “My Descent into Madness.” I am sure there are some bad ones I will just need to weed them out.”

  5. johanna says:

    I also got stuck on Earth like a pap smear. Can’t get past it. Must be a girl thing.

  6. hames1977 says:

    wow, nice poem, interesting one.

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